Thursday, September 30, 2010


You are a colorful castle
Mesmerizing from outside
Attractive and very strong
Every queen wants to own you
They feel safe being inside you

So many secrets hid behind those closed doors
Kings and queens get in to puzzles to find the key
You have mysteries surrounding you
They want to know you, want to open your doors
The keys are never found and seem lost in history

Some say you are a human, or a ghost
Locked yourself up in your own heart
Showing the old glorious face outside
But hiding the pain and suffering inside
You stink because of the air locked in you

You haven’t seen sunlight for years and decades
Lot of untold stories still whisper inside
People keep trying to break the curse and find the key
They keep falling in love with you
You remain, as you were, closed and strong



ಸೀತಾರಾಮ. ಕೆ. / SITARAM.K said...

I remembered takeshis castle serial in pogo channel-i never seen somebody winning it.
Your mastery on words are really great. nice one.

kanasu said...

niceee! :)

ದಿನಕರ ಮೊಗೇರ.. said...

ಭಾಶೇ ಮೇಡಮ್,
ವಿಭಿನ್ನ ಪ್ರಯತ್ನ ಎನಿಸಿತು...... ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ.....

- ಕತ್ತಲೆ ಮನೆ... said...


ಹಳ್ಳಿ ಹುಡುಗ ತರುಣ್ said...

nice one...